If I could change anything in the would

 

If I could change anything in the word

 it would be “hate”

because it is a sad fate.

Every other emotion would be late

Due to the satisfaction

In the reaction

of the pain

that comes from the one we most hate.

We are deprived

to fully strive

in a world

where emotion becomes so cold.

Hate gets no success

So its nothing good to possess.

We must learn to let go

In order to reach a better goal

Where our story can be told.

If I could change anything in this world it would truly be “hate”.

Comments

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741