I wish I could bake a cake filled with rainbows and smiles and everyone would eat and be happy.

Tue, 06/25/2013 - 18:55 -- Hi_Lexi

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Rules aren’t supposed to be taken literally It would be in your best interest If you followed them to the T   The bible isn’t supposed to be taken word for word Let it serve as a guide Listen and you will be heard   A science book is supposed to be exact All over there is sources What they say is indeed fact   I believe that God made a chicken And it laid an egg I believe if you are guilty, you are done No matter how hard you beg That you’re innocent We all know what you did was wrong Well fight the system, its broke And you are strong You were made that way No matter what you believe And I think we all have the power To do great things

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Hi_Lexi

So you're reading, eh? I like you already. All this poem is saying is that there are Mean Girls everywhere. We don't call them Mean Girls anymore we call them Society. Society tells us to do this and be that, but once you do something someone is ready to attack you and I don't think that is right. This system is broke yo (Adventure Time reference) and we must fight it. We have to be creative by any means necessary. We are all poets, some people choose to not use words but use actions or thoughts. We all have different beliefs. One person's belief is not better than another. We are all created equal and so are our minds. No one can control our minds, but us. Sorry I'm like preaching and making no sense, but I think you understand my opinion. So enjoy the poem and treat yourself to some food. Don't listen to the pressure that society puts on us. If food isn't your thing (who does't like food though I mean everyone should like food?) you should treat yourself to a movie or something you like. I love the movie Mean Girls it is my life. My message is to not be a Mean Girl and just be who you are. 

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