I Want to Hug Someone

Fri, 09/11/2015 - 11:56 -- k8carr
I want to hug someone


It's a clumsy secret that I hold on to

During lonely nights when I'm thinking

When reality is far away

And the future seems nearer than the past
 

I think of someone

A lover, or a child,

Someone who cares

Or rather that I can care for.
 

And I can just hold on.

It lasts forever and continues on

The feeling of peace and calm

Of that future moment

When I will love someone
More than anything in the world.

This poem is about: 
Me
My community
My country
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Comments

Truth Forbes

i got two hugs the other day...i was so happy. i never get hugs and even though they were from people i barely knew....they were still hugs. This poem describes how i feel everyday

k8carr

thank you so much for commenting, it's good to know that someone read this and could relate to it

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