I suffered, yet you got all the glory

Fri, 08/11/2017 - 12:09 -- Someone

 

I hope you know…

You left me in woe.

You put scars on me,

And left me with the fee.

 

Remember I can feel,

The hurting that won't ever heal.

I have Chains because of you.

And it's a lot more than two.

 

But I'm stronger than you,

And all your crew. 

Don't you see the life in me?

I've pushed through it all never finding glee.

 

Never happy nor sad.

Never scared or even mad.

Just empty and gone.

you were so wrong. 

 

I've pushed though the point of breaking. 

The point of making… 

A young death my story

Yet you got all the glory

Comments

Someone

I'm in middle school I wanted to know if my poetry is good or if I should just stop poetry 

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerfully written, never stop expressing your heart and mind, please share more. 

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