I Said Good-bye

Tue, 01/21/2014 - 23:46 -- Akira05

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I said good-bye to her

Because I had no choice

My mother dragging me away--

From the only friend I had known.

 

I said good-bye to him

Because death took him

In the form of a Grim Reaper

Weilding a katana.

 

I said good-bye to you

Because my heart still ached

For the fool who brandished his control

Sticking it into my heart like a blade.

 

I said good-bye to myself

Because all my logic abandoned me

As I ran back to you

Forgetting who I was then.

 

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