I Love Lucy

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Her smile could brighten up a cabin

Her skin glowed in the summer sunlight

Jesus Christ, she’s beautiful.

Her freckles dotted her face

Her hair barely touched her ears

She’s brilliant

A mouth like a sailor with a sweet voice

A not caring persona but has a heart of gold

And

I’m just a freak

A guy who doesn’t know his space

A dude who doesn’t know what words to say

Someone who sits in the house all day

Who sometimes has the feeling his heart is going to explode out of his chest in fear

How I would fight hard just to know your story

How could anyone so beautiful

So smart

So awesome

Even call me a friend?

But she does....

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