I Finally Feel Alive

Looking into your eyes never wanting to let go,

laying on your chest listening to your heartbeat flow.

Wondering how did I get so lucky to have a young fella like you, so sweet and gold. 

My hand in yours laying in the night sky,

feeling alive, letting time pass by. 

I feel free, you help spread my wings like an eagle soaring wild and free.

You bring out the best in me, the potential that's locked in a box, you amaze me. 

 

You seen me at my darkest lies,

even when I was crushed wanting to die, you seen me,

you made me feel alive. 

Through the scars on my face, even being last in the girls race,

you chose me and decided to take a taste. 

 

You wanted to go deeper within my soul, like a book you opened me up, and took control. 

I was afraid of the way you seen right through 

me, but loving the thought of how we could be.

Could this go farther than my imagination?

 Is this the start of desirable burning sensation? 

I was afraid of my thoughts developing into a twisted creation. 

 

You lift my head up looking into my eyes with no fear.

I felt insecure with the smell of your fragrance,

the feeling of your touch, my mind went into a strange rush. 

Tears begin to fall, thoughts rushing through my head like a wrecking ball. 

I felt you were going to be a thieve in the night and leave.

You being to kiss and hold me, saying you'll never fold on me. 

 

You gave me comfort, you made me whole,

I no longer felt that my world was stuck in a small hole.

You became my best friend, the one I could depend on,

I was no longer like a small fawn.

You made me realize that I'm beautiful, 

just like a true ace, you made me realize that I'm worth the chase. 

 

This wasn't no imagination, you were my saving grace, my fondest salvation. 

I now look in the mirror with no insecurities, not even the slightest impurities. 

I thank you for bringing out this spontaneous

girl, the one who's now outspoken, no longer

left sad and broken. You were my cure and that's one thing I know for sure. 

 

Because you love me, you were brave and never gave up on me. 

Because I love you, I know that I'm willing to go the extra mile,

no doubts just a smile. 

 

 

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