I Came Back

Come on girl-

Let it whirl!

Get some rhymin';

FInd your timing!

You don't have to race

to find the right pace.

Don't fight-

Just WRITE!

 

O.K. it's coming along-

Look at the key

Guidelines.

Any corrections?

Should you speed

Up the rhythm,

Or maybe

Slow

It

Down.

                      What's it

           Look like?

                                                                                                                        Your form is

                                                           Fumbling.

 

           What're you doing?

 

I don't know.

 

These rappers

They got it goin'

So easy

It's blowin'

My mind

How they're showin'

Off their skills.

Hopin'

I will be that good.

 

        I never will.

 

I mean-

Look at this!

It's piss!

It's so bad

It makes me sad.

                                                              Sad?!

                                                                                 Bad?!

No teacher

Would ever feature

Words so simple

And ugly as a pimple

As those.

 

THIS blows.

 

I'm sorry, I fail.

I'll come back

to this

 

later.

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