How it should be.
Love should look like roses on a cold wintry evening.
not like withered grass on a cold wintry morning
Love should represent the strength of two individuals.
not highlight the weaknesses in one or each other
Love should be a bond between two individuals that can't be broken.
not a fragile tree branch blowing in the wind
Love should be a passionate force between two.
not a lustful invitation, matched with bitterness
Love should measure the quality of a relationship.
not the quantity of what's in someone's wallet
Love should make a vow to stay, ..no matter what.
not be here today and gone tomorrow
Love should always be right.
never left
Love should always be capitalized.
never lowercased
Love should always represent a completed thought.
never a sentence fragment
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Angelwith1wing
Nice poem. I like the way you bring out what love is suppose to be and what is not suppose to be. It really does distinguish what most call love and what should be love. Thank for typing up a poem with some wisdom about love. People will truly appreiciate your honesty and wisdom through this poem and more. Keep writing on my friend:).
azon84
Wow... That was totally wonderful. I love it. Thank you for reminding me to write and thank you for letting everyone read this.