Home is Washed Away in the Sunset

 

Home is gone

gone... My home is a sunset going away

down in the dark going

splish, splash in the puddle of tears

splish, splash, stomp, whin.

trying to not say goodbye.

going, going gone forever not to be found

gone, gone

with a bang, whin, and tears

trying to rise 

with the sun just trying,

and trying but not able to be found.

Home is gone

gone... My home is a sunset going away

down in the dark

in the drain

all lonely, all sad

trying to come

just trying to come

trying to come out,

with the sun.

with a crash, boom, and splash

falling, falling

down in the drain again, and again,

and again.

crying, whining, pouting all over

to say please dont

Don't, don't go

please, please don't

 

 

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