Hey!

Hey!

Hey You!

I love you!!

Does my love show!?

Look!! My heart just glows!!

Hey! Have you seen my smile!?

Isn't it clear how I feel for you!?

Don't you see the affect you have on me!?

Look how much I want you!! Don't you love me!?

I think about you enough. You could be mine!

Hey!! You can't do much better than me!

Listen! Let's be honest, you're kinda ugly.

You can't just IGNORE me!

Hey! Yes you!!

ANSWER ME!!!!

 

HEY!!!!!

 

...oh wait...

I know better.

That's right. You can't.

They are our equals too...

Or at least they should be...

Can't just talk to them like that.

They only owe me common courtesy. Nothing more.

No. I know better. I gotta be better.

Become better at controlling myself. Better at respecting others. 

When tables turn, I don't want this happening to me.

This poem is about: 
My community

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thebuzzingnurse

This was just for fun. I was trying to do an increasing/decreasing word count to challenge myself to see if I could use word limitations and still make my point come across. Let me know what y'all think. (Please be kind.)

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