Heartache

Sun, 09/29/2013 - 22:07 -- xione7

On the ground I lay 

Motionless I stay

Her words resounding in my head

Her face is turning red

Was it something I said

Am I asleep

Is my soul mine to keep

I need to awaken

I hear my heart breaken 

my mind is shaken

Help me to awaken

I was not aware 

in my eyes there is despair

I'm living a nightmare!

Comments

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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