Hai ku's

Chocolate hai ku

warm chocolatey 
the sugary sensation 
making life joyful

Humming bird hai ku

vampires of the flower world
draining the nector
stealing the life

Outdoors

a place to see
a vivid world so beautiful 
a place to be

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