Go Ask Alice

Go ask Alice in her padded cell how she took a tumble and fell down a rabbit hole of illusion now don’s a straight-jacket of confusion.   Go ask Alice with her veins full of Lithium how she surrendered to her delirium of smoking caterpillars and a grinning feline and is now attached to an Intravenous mainline.   Go ask Alice about her sanity how it vanished in this asylum of rhapsody in a fog that is translucent and hypnotic in her Wonderland of painted narcotics. 



Annette M Velasquez

This is very surreal, vivid and original. I like the word choices, rhyme and descriptiveness.


Thank you! 

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