Gentle soul by: Luis V

Gentle Soul by: Luis V

 

I’ve been called a gentle soul

I’ve been told I should keep that personality with me

But than people ruined me 

Killed my gentleness 

I killed my gentleness 

Lost to many trust for people 

Hated people for so long 

I hate my dad 

My dad hurt me 

I killed my gentleness

I know life is not all rainbows and unicorns

And I knew I was not going to survive in this world 

By trusting way to many people and than they destroy my trust

So I killed me 

Created a new me 

One that can survive on his own 

One that does not need his father 

One that does not want his father to see his grandchildren

 

This poem is about: 
Me

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