*FORGIVE..IF YOU WILL*

Thu, 08/20/2015 - 15:58 -- Missa88

This is me... Drinking beer to make sure i don't see clear. Will you forgive me Mom.? Staying indoor's. No i don't have any flaw's. Taking "Shit" drinking even more you bet. Will you forgive me Mom? Forgive me.? Please Forgive me for my Sins. My Negative feeling's. Please forgive me. For clearly i did not see. I sure as heck wasn't being me. Will you forgive me Mom.? For all the bad thing's that iv'e done.? Not like your "goody two-shoes" Son.

This poem is about: 
Me
My family

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! 

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