Fishing in the Rain

Thu, 10/25/2018 - 22:56 -- Awhart

The rain it drops and on my jacket it drips. Im tying knots as you're giving me tips. you show me the blood knot and a dubble half hicth. The line cracks my hands but I dont quit. You tell me I'm smart I say your insane because my grades disapeared like the drips in the rain. But you say the drips make a puddle then a river then a lake in the end you never know the life your going to make. Though it seems impossible or maybe insane life can make a splash like your fishing in the rain.

This poem is about: 
Me
My family

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Awhart

My uncle taught me to fish. When I was younger he said I could be a doctor I told him I wasnt smart enough to be in or even  get into collage. A couple years ago he passed away. Now I'm in my second term at school. I wrote this for him. 

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