At First it was, but now it's not.

Mon, 09/30/2013 - 16:49 -- VanaW13

            At first, it was dark, dull, black, almost sad.

            But as we slowly turned on our course, the vibrant colors started to creep over the edge of living.

            Soon a battle erupted, the vibrant colors trying to fight back the sadness.

            At first the sadness was winning, but then the colors started to explode and blast the sadness away.

            Finally, the darkness was no more, it was replaced with vibrant oranges, pinks, yellows, and even some light green.

            At first it was dark…

                        But now it’s not…

                        It’s a new day and it brings such mystery but it also brings happiness.

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