Fire Up////Fire Down///

Wed, 11/03/2021 - 21:16 -- Wired6

Gentle emotion,

Shakes,breaks,spins around.

Without Love,

hate couldn't have blossomed, essentially overgrown.

 

She,is never going back home.

As far as she's concerned,shes

better without her in her life.

Fire up///fire down/// she's never looking back.

 

©Wired6. 27/10/2021

Comments

Nathan3259

I really like this one! Nice usage of words and punctuation

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