Faults

Sun, 06/30/2013 - 16:45 -- zee

Location

Should I be sad or feel sorry 

For the lonely house wife whose husband is six feet under

Even though it wasn't my fault I didn't give him the pain or neediness

Maybe because I didn't show compassion for him that’s why he is gone

What if it were you but it's not me 

And I am not sorry and I don't feel pain 

His leaving does not make me want to cry does not make me want to isolate myself

If anything his death makes me want to live

And I know that’s what he wanted he wanted to move on

 

So is it my faults  that bury him or is it yours

Comments

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741