Fateful Love

Follow me into the house
Of light and darkness
Whisper in my ear
Takes of nothingness
As the shadows fade
Over snowy mountain tops
Colder than ice
Frozen on the tree branches
My heart is beating
To the sound of your breath
As we sway together
In the atmosphere

This poem is about: 
Me

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S.zaynab.k

Wow a cool lovely poem. Written swell n light as breeze. Thumbs up.

 

 . pls do review my latest poem too, I'm quite new here but have been writing elsewhere for ages and readers say they get messages for life from my poems. So pls add your thoughts under it.

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