Falling Petals

Asking for support and not your agreement,

I looked into your eyes

 

Seeing rejection, a stare blank and cold,

all connection was untied

 

Words became hollow, our rose only thorns,

a new distance did we share

 

Alone while together, the ending in sight

—reality laid bare 

 

(Villanova Pennsylvania: August, 2020) 

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