Mon, 07/01/2013 - 20:05 -- sdanley


3127 Fawn Rd
United States
30° 16' 44.7348" N, 85° 36' 58.6188" W

The waves of the ocean;

Overwhelming emotions

Push me under the surface

And bury me in the water.


But suddenly a switch turns on.

Maybe it's not so hopeless after all.

Pour those emotion waves

Onto a fresh, blank page.


Now I'm not drowning

Instead I'm making beautiful




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