Evelyn

Location

 

Sleeping within waves

Her thoughts drift by-

 

The sea encompasses her

A soothing blue blanket

Calm, content, secure.

 

With each ebb and flow she sways

Like a child being cradled to sleep.

 

Finally feeling at peace

Here she is safe.

 

Her hair spread across the pillow like

A starfish upon the ocean floor.

 

She dreams of riding on the backs of whales

While sleeping within waves

Resting inside a sea of creativity.

Comments

sarajaye

I saw a painting of a girl on this very blue background. She looked like she was sleeping and I thought about the ocean. Then I wrote this poem.

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