Energy

Energy affects ones mood as the way weather does to others

The sun you can not look at it

but the way it makes you feel

So nice

simply it is

No wonder people compare the sun to God

You can’t look at him but you can feel him

The rain wet cold allows the world to be baptized

The dirt doesn't really go away

It worsens becomes muddy

How come when you purify yourself

Temptation hightens

Are you reborn as you claim

The demons no longer yours

You accept your soul as it is now pure

 

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