Eat My Foolish Dreams

It is by these preserved roads

that children lay their woven reeds

among hilltops where fighting 

hopeless fell among the grass as did

they once lay in their youth

dreaming over a settled peace

that a generation comets beyond them

would play in fields of gold

yeild! 

Pleasure hangs from a rope

over charred pitts of burning coal

my young

play down the streets

i fear my fellow has taken our apologies

and left termoil in our shoes

Comments

Additional Resources

Get AI Feedback on your poem

Interested in feedback on your poem? Try our AI Feedback tool.
 

 

If You Need Support

If you ever need help or support, we trust CrisisTextline.org for people dealing with depression. Text HOME to 741741