Drunk

Tue, 08/27/2013 - 19:40 -- Serina

Spinning, Spinning,
all around.
Spinning, Spinning,
listen to these sounds!
Spinning, Spinning,
where am I now?
Spinning, Spinning,
all around.
Spinning, Spinning,
into others.
Spinning, Spinning,
don't tell my mother.
Spinning, Spinning,
out of a bar.
Spinning, Spinning,
to a car.
Spinning, Spinning,
here I go!
Spinning, Spinning,
on the road.
Spinning, Spinning,
to my door.
No more spinning.
I passed out on the floor.

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