Drifting Star

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Among the stars

She dwells alone

With the saddest eyes you'll ever know

For here on Mars

Just isn't home but here she stays forever more...

 

Floating above us

Like a drifting cloud

Her only wish is to come back down

But float she must

Without a sound

Cause to her mind she's forever bound.

 

The milkeyway flows 

In the pools of her eyes

You can dive right in but theres always a price

A heart made of thunder

With lightning she strikes

Because only in darkness can you truly shine bright!

 

 

 

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