Drifting Away

Fri, 10/09/2015 - 09:33 -- 68tea

my mind is slowly drifting

beautifully, I don't know if i'm existing

getting my mind blurry and high

and if you know, you know why

my fragile heart feels so cold

if only,I was never too old

take my away from this close-minded world

and take me somewhere, where everything is swirled

with dreams, way far from my imagination

 my curious soul goes to another long vacation

the universe is in the palm of my hands

a little unique world with plenty of lands

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