My eyes close only to be reopened

uploading with cerebral motions

visual explosions

Gazing over a world of subconscious

overwhelming of senses,

unaware of time and distance

at rest

yet wide awake

thoughts compressed

more innate

with every breathe


I ingest

The mind excels

as visions swell

A Chance

aspired reality

becomes actuality

in virtuality

simple complexity

An outer body experience

within deep mental sentence

My eyes could be open forever

but eventually must close

as to not get lost in dreams


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