Dream Pill

Location

90047
United States
33° 57' 6.93" N, 118° 18' 29.5308" W

I'm so done with my household
I can't stay here anymore
This place is making me lose my mind
I feel like I'm about to explode

My parents won't shut their traps
My sister can't get her grades on track
I don't feel like my bro's getting any attention
And everyone wants to point their fingers at my back

This is fucking insane
I can't wait to go away
Off to college where dreams come true
But I need cash to make that claim

So here I sit in dire need
Rummaging desperately through a computer screen
To catch some sort of lucky break
And catch the pill to make me dream

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