Don't believe in what your eyes always see (part1)

Wed, 10/09/2013 - 23:51 -- Jmagic

My name is Josh and I am a chan. Many might know me.

Many might fear, and might even laugh. Do you really know me?

I know me, I walk into an Asylum and it is, 

dark, cold, and empthy like if nobody is home.

Many might say I am Exeplary towards another person.

But I say Not! I am here at the Asylum to find my

long lost brother. I have done so much to find my

brother, I must not Capitulate now. As I walk through the

front doors I see it is dark, empthy, with a weelchair faceing

towards the front desk but the desk is silent and

a light buld is flikering off and on, off and on.

Out of the blue I hear a loud Bang! Coming from 

the darkness of the hallway. Sundenly  a soft 

evil laugh sounds right after. Strangely it seems as 

if I heard this laugh before. I shake off the thought

 and just then my body starts following the laugh

into the drakness of the hallway. ...

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