Do we Love?

Location

07746
United States
40° 19' 36.5088" N, 74° 15' 11.3292" W

Is it too late to tell you
---I love you
Did you hear my screams
---I hate you!
Can I say we had good ole days?
---I needed you? I need you?
I don't know
Fuzzy, confused thoughts
Where were you when I broke down?
You say I moved out of town
You, you are my father
but you have responsibility
You should need me
I should need you
We both need to open our eyes and see

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

amazing piece

very emotional-can sense your passion when you wrote this piece

keep writing

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