Deep in the ocean
Deep in the ocean, I am.
Where no one can see me.
No one is even there to conquer.
Where no one can approach me.
Just there with my own thoughts.
Far away from the mysteries.
Far away from the galaxies of the ground reality.
I found myself very brightly.
Deep in the ocean.
Deep in the ocean.
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Alex Pepper
I really love the way this poems makes me feel the empowerment of the deep ocean.
An amazing poem 👏🏻
cecilymock
Your evocative poem reminds me of Mary Oliver's intimate observations of nature and self-discovery, particularly in her work "Wild Geese." Like Oliver, you've created a meditative space where solitude becomes a source of strength rather than loneliness. The repetition of "Deep in the ocean" acts as a powerful anchor, much like waves returning to shore, while your phrase "galaxies of the ground reality" paints a stunning image that transforms the everyday into something cosmic and profound. I especially admire how you've used the ocean as both a physical setting and a metaphor for self-reflection – this dual meaning adds wonderful depth to your work. Consider exploring even more sensory details in future poems; your voice already shows such promise in creating these contemplative spaces. Keep writing and diving deep into these beautiful metaphorical waters!
cecilymock
Your evocative poem reminds me of Mary Oliver's intimate observations of nature and self-discovery, particularly in her work "Wild Geese." Like Oliver, you've created a meditative space where solitude becomes a source of strength rather than loneliness. The repetition of "Deep in the ocean" acts as a powerful anchor, much like waves returning to shore, while your phrase "galaxies of the ground reality" paints a stunning image that transforms the everyday into something cosmic and profound. I especially admire how you've used the ocean as both a physical setting and a metaphor for self-reflection – this dual meaning adds wonderful depth to your work. Consider exploring even more sensory details in future poems; your voice already shows such promise in creating these contemplative spaces. Keep writing and diving deep into these beautiful metaphorical waters!