day of celebration

its a time of triumph
its a moment of glory
its a day of epic proportions
its a night to reflect
its a second that counts every time one achieve greatness
everyday, its a war against people that stop one from full content
when one conquers, that is a reason to celebrate
everyday, people find reasons to suppress one because they hate
when you survive each day, it is a moment of victory
enjoy that time to rejoice
always exercise the power to express your voice
always remember, don't be comfortable, be uncomfortable
people are like sharks, they smell blood
make certain to swim away or fall deep into a flood

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ambercurry37

I like the repetition; "its a" and then "everyday" and "always". It keeps the poem grounded. Great job.

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