dark place

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It's a new day, but is it really ?
You can't see It's too foggy
You feel like you can't breathe
No one can see you walk by
Are you really walking by ? Do they see YOU ? Or do they see a black animal
Everything is falling apart as you sit and hear a boom -- a noise that you feel on the side of your head
As those hands fly like birds racing to get food
All senses shut down as it becomes even harder to see
You walk home as if you've been in the bar all day
Laying in bed Letting Everything take control over you while taking those you call ''Wild Barriers''
.... Bang ! It goes black

Comments

claytonc

Quuite interseting, and very to the point I like it!

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