Dangling in Your Arms

he’s soft and nostalgic

a world so prolific

I want him, I want him

and

she dances above him

he closes his eyes

is he thinking about me?

does he see my heart beating

with the rhythm of his breathing?

I wish I was yours

I wish you were mine

If I give myself to you,

will it suffice?

 

This poem is about: 
Me

Comments

Zanies

The desire in the poem is so upfront. I love it!

dolores852

thankyou<3

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