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Glorious silver, sheen and sharp

Soft white flakes, broken apart by the hull of the boat

The breaking like the sound of a harp

And over it lays a dark burgundy coat

 

The ocean unfurls and stretches, splaying its fingers towards the earth

And it begins to rain

Deep inside, something is burning and roaring within the hearth

It is pain

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