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Thu, 01/17/2019 - 17:45 -- ray21

The tide is rising

Takes my feet from under me

Carries me along

The force of its waters

Have taken me farther than I have intended to go

I tried to stand:  strong

Against its current

The force of which

My strength is futile

I am swept away.

 

    

This poem is about: 
Me

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Very creatively written

ray21

Thanks... lots of inspiration for this one.   

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