Conversations With the Wind
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I thought you abandoned me,
But still you block certain mistakes
With your invisible locks
I hear your voice often in our invisible talks
Where you teach me wisdom and
Point out the World's invisible walls
Throughout our invisible walks
On these physical blocks.
It's been a while since I've spoken to you, God.
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realtreerach
this was beautiful.. please read my poems. (:
celery95
My goodness. I quite enjoyed that.
brillz
i dont know if it's wrong to ask but can i ask what kind of conversation you guys really had?
thisispoetryproject
It's in no way wrong to ask, brillz. I believe God speaks to all of us differently because we all have our own relationships with God; mine is bittersweet. Our conversations aren't continuous-- i.e. I do not say "hi" and God replies "how are you" and then I begin to praise life/complain (that might get me sent away for psychological diagnosis). God or the Universe or our intuition (whatever you prefer) speaks in a manner that we will best understand For me, that is with philosophy or, as I like to call it, higher thinking. So our "conversations" may begin with a thought. Something like, "how can there ever be world peace with religion if the majority of religions say everyone outside of that religion is damned to hell for eternity". And so I will go on thinking about this problem and the different solutions and will find myself digging deeper and coming to realizations about the world that I haven't yet discovered. God initiates conversation and allows us the option to entertain it or not.
thisispoetryproject
It's in no way wrong to ask, brillz. I believe God speaks to all of us differently because we all have our own relationships with God; mine is bittersweet. Our conversations aren't continuous-- i.e. I do not say "hi" and God replies "how are you" and then I begin to praise life/complain (that might get me sent away for psychological diagnosis). God or the Universe or our intuition (whatever you prefer) speaks in a manner that we will best understand For me, that is with philosophy or, as I like to call it, higher thinking. So our "conversations" may begin with a thought. Something like, "how can there ever be world peace with religion if the majority of religions say everyone outside of that religion is damned to hell for eternity". And so I will go on thinking about this problem and the different solutions and will find myself digging deeper and coming to realizations about the world that I haven't yet discovered. God initiates conversation and allows us the option to entertain it or not.
rawrrainee
Explains me all too perfectly. It's like everything that describes me in a single minute.
Good job!
powerful.imani
This poem I can definitely relate to because GOD has helped me though the tuffs times and he has guild me to be able to write and speak for people who can't .And i have started a very strong relationship with the lord and this poem really is golden to be able to follow god's message and you being able to build from it and grow from it. Excellent and very well said . And since you are a mentor i believe your dream will come true and can't wait to see your poetry and messages brighten this world keep up the amazing work because i believe in everyone and you can do anything you put your mind to.
Check out my poetry and hope it inspire you and other (hope my dreams come true with poetry because we have that in common i would love to be a voice around the world so hopefully i we both reach our dreams because with a attitude like yours so confident you will .
Keep on inspiring others and always listen to GOD