Coma

Thu, 09/05/2013 - 00:52 -- Poto97

Location

91744
United States
34° 1' 38.8632" N, 117° 55' 50.7288" W

The cold

The black

Freedom

Or cage

 

Pictures

Of life

Some sad

Happy

 

A choice

Live hurting

Get better

Or escape

Be free

 

See friends

Family

See grandfather

And ancestors

 

Wait for friends

But go

To heaven

Or hell

 

Heaven, the light

Hell, in darkness

One choice

Live or die

 

I live

The pain

The recovery

I heal

 

And ask

How long

She says

Forever

 

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