Colby -my first lover

we were walking in the rain, few days ago, when you say you love me.

i look up at you, your curls wet with rain, and feel my heart expand.

your warm, hazel eyes look down into mine, slightly anxious.

i love you too, but im too afraid to say it.

i wrap my arms around your waist, and lay my head on your chest,

and whisper it into the air, i love you too.

 

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