Climb of Situations

Face the struggling of a mountain climb

All the while can speak nothing but rhyme

Feeling empty, yet an infinitus fountain of situations gone wrong

When nothing around can seem to go right comfort is found in a song

Nervously climbing all the way up

The peak is nearing slowly

A sudden stop, what’s the holdup

Silence speaks so lonely

A crisp ice breeze scolds concentration

Releasing my grasp without hesitation

Achievement is lost in the blink of an eye

There must be something I can’t see

So close to the summit why did I release?

It seems that the stress was too much for me

I have learned, my mind absorbed lessons as a sponge

And I have grown sense my greatest plunge

I'll reach the top, I'll fight brisk winds off, this time I'll show them all

Maybe I can't do it all but all who've achieved have had their share of falls

 

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