Wed, 07/09/2014 - 18:53 -- k_grace

I wish I could see you

One last time,


Drive you around,

Show you my life,


Introduce you to my passions,

Impress you with my heart,


Sit down, talk,

Split a bottle of red wine.


Before I was invading,

We never used to hide


These feelings

now imprisoned inside


--Before it was complicated,

When we could just vibe.


Swallow your words, dear.

Close your heart to mine.


Open your eyes

To the outside;


Because I know we must

Leave our life behind.


So, cheers-- 

Here's to our goodbye.



Very nice poem and its well written

Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression. Always let poetry fill your life. 

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