Wow, I love this. I think this type of poem really shows the level of 

gifting a poet might have. If you can write very little and still make 

the poem powerful, you have a talent. Keep Writing! 

I enjoyed your poem because that line is so true. People who fight for what

they believe in often have boiling anger residing within them. Nice. 

I hope you post in the spit stream, you definitley should. 

Cynthia

Power Poetry Mentor