Chamber maid

Mon, 11/11/2013 - 12:14 -- m__23

Chamber maid Where art thouThe one remembering my nameScreaming it than hiding as it echoesDoes I give you a fright masterSo much that you summon meThen hide in the trenchesIs our meeting forbiddenAre ye something else I am unable to obtainShare with me what you desireSo you will stop your trimmers at nightOpen your gates and end your cries to my barred windows   

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m__23

11 years ago

I don't know what my favorite part is,  it can be the anticipation of seeing whether or not the two will get together, or it can be the anxiety of being tempted by something your not suppose to have or want

m__23

11 years ago

I don't know what my favorite part is,  it can be the anticipation of seeing whether or not the two will get together, or it can be the anxiety of being tempted by something your not suppose to have or want

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