Castle

We were all I'd ever known 

I thought things were fine

Had to build my army strong 

My generals upright

I thought I was the queen

I was always winning

'Til I was knocked down on the ground

Looking up I saw you smile

And laughing all the while

My castle started crumbling 

And my crown fell away rumbling

This poem is about: 
Me

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