BROKEN HEART

We fell in love out in the cold,it was so dark and we were alone.
They say not all that glitters is gold but baby your hair was glittering gold.
On Sunday morning we went to Church, stopped on the way and played till it was dark.
We found a tree out in the park,we curved our names in the shape of a heart.

But your Mama didn't like me at all
She said I's busy doing nothing at all
We tried to force it but it couldn't work
Until we made it when you broke my heart

When my 1st kiss came from your lips, couldn't believe how it made me weak.
Felt really sweet but felt like a sin,felt like I's living deep in a dream.
Went to my friend and told it to her,she laughed at me and got into her car.
I sneaked out again and went to the bar only to find you kissing with her.

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