Brighter

Look beyond the "concrete jungle"

and witness the view.

There is a scenery out there that lies before me as well as you.

We are surrounded by goodness

that is ignored by us all 

The beauty of the wind, rain, clouds, and the sight of snowfall.

You know there are two great seas, 

One above and below.

One houses an enchanted marine world, the other a golden glow.

The stress and negativity keeps us from 

Cherishing all of this,

Turning each of us into a malicious and heartless fighter.

But our world is blessed and awesome

 despite the pain.

Looking at the world this way, it is so much brighter.

 

This poem is about: 
Our world

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