Breaking Dawn

Tue, 12/11/2018 - 21:12 -- ray21

 

In the Dark I wake to the sound of Your voice

Beforethe dawn's light peaks

I will bring my offerng to you

Early I will awken the dawn with my praise

Early I will awaken the day with my prayer

Early I will awaken its light with my voice

Breakthrough the darkness that surround's you

Push back the still black of night

Solder of the night

One can move the night

Two can cause the sun to rise

There are no limits to those who are wise

This poem is about: 
Our world

Comments

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Beautiful poem

well said, glad you promote this to mvp group

ray21

Thank you!  Appreciate the encouragement.  

 

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